should i move this poem to the love poem area or do you think it fits well here? i couldnt decide

wow....erica you wrote that..wow...thats really good...yeah...i love you! haha

first two lines..
hmm gotta work on that
but otherwise its good

Nice job keep it up

wow i really like this poem... i know exactally how it is too... i recently stopped cutting because of a friend of mine was talkin to me about it.... it hard yes... but with his help i know i can get thru it... awesome poem

~*~heyz, thanx for ur comments on my poems/songs lol. I really appreciated it and i like this poem because it shows how ur truly feeling and i'm happy for you because you have found someone who makes you feel luved enough to put down that knife,a nd i actually just wrote a poem about someone doing the same for me but i haven't posted it yet because i'm still editing it, but i can relate to this poem. Good job and keep ur head up and that smile on ur face 'cause things get better, trust me i've been through it all and i'm sorry that my poem/song offended you i just wrote was on my mind and things that others can relate to but anywho always fight for another day {Mwah}
-Jenna~*~

I know how you feel and i can really relate to this poem great job 5/5 and thanx for reading my poem.

An interesting read, it could use some work though. Still the overall effect worked well, it's just the minor details.

Keep Writing
Nici

Good poem! I'll give it a 5/5. Keep writing and stay strong!

-Ice

This was good.

Beautifully written. Very sad. Keep up the wonderful work. XX

i really like this poem too! great rhyming..

I liked it. Very strong and emotional. I think I liked this one best. Very nice job. Keep it up and never stop writing!

~rolo

well the message was very well portraid, but the only thing I would have to say there are alot of co dependancy issues here. I would be weary of that. For Icome from the back ground if you can't walk through life no depending on some one the why waste your time just a thought take care...