by The Flame Within Apr 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The paper is covered with words that no one sees, the beautiful words flood the page and show so much potential. as they describe a life of suffering, if only everyone could see these words describe who i really am. who the person inside is. look closely at this letter with not words on it. there is more to it then you think. but then again. i wonder? am i a word with no definition......am i meaning less |
by girlii797
Great Job!! it was deep, shows great emotion!!! Keep it up, you are very talented. |
by Hurtingsoul
your not meaning less flame your amazing your great i love you your a great guy |
by Victoria
Very emotional poem its great thanks so much for the comment! |
by Just Sierra
That was awesome!! Ofcourse I will pray for you!! Im sorry your going through a difficult time! I hope things get better for you!! I really hope you take care of yourself, and make wise decisions!! |
by Iyla
wow, i really liked the end, but all together it was a very good poem. great job. |