i think it was great, i loved it, and you wrote it from heart which is the most important thing to do!!!
keep it up hun u'll do great!

Luv Always
*Lucy*

i think it was a good poem and if you eva need to confide in someone email me at oh2b_cool@yahoo.com

wow! it's really good! i really like it! i love how you wrote from your heart! and if you need to confide in someone... well you kinda are now. i'm talking to ya! lol... but if you do, email me.. k?
xox
Ariel