by katie! Apr 17, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
You all judge me on the cuts and scars you see on my body |
by Sarah-Louise
Real heartfelt poem, but I think that because your lines are so long the flow goes a bit funny in some places. If you made the lines a bit shorter, then it wouldn't take so long to read between rhyming couplets. Apart from that, real good poem! Take care sarah-Lou x x x |