I wish/you

by rachel   Apr 17, 2005


I wish you didn't still make me smile.
I wish my heart wouldn't skip a beat every time i see you.
i wish i could get you off my mind for a while.
i wish when i tell people I'm over you it could be true.
i wish i could let you finally go.
i wish you were the way you used to be.
i wish i didn't love you so.
i wish things were like they were before you stopped loving me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    This was short, sweet, and to the point! I liked it alot!
    Love alwayz....
    hAiLy
    XOXOXOXOXO

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    Technically, there's nothing wrong with the poem. Poetically, it lacks substance.

    It's a good poem, but don't count on it being your best. ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    5/5, i really liked the rhyming scheme and can totally realte. keep it up
    ~*~KiM~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    thanx guys its means lots comin frm use cus ur all so amazin, and on my faves alredi btw xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Misstress

    I think this one deserves...5.
    I honestly like it..
    Keep on writing,,
    Okies..Cookies..
    ;)

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