Jaide

by Will   Sep 2, 2003


I need to hold you in my arms
you make me feel complete
i cry everynight hoping that
someday we will meet.

life isnt always what you want it to be
sometimes i feel left out
but you are my world and my hope
and i wont ever let go of that

sometimes at night i look at the stars
i see your face in the sky
i know that i have to travel far
but i cant bear to part

i will tell you my secrets
i will never tell you lies
your the greatest person
ever to find

i dream about you in my sleep
these feelings i adore
i keep on wishing that one day
youll be knocking at my door

i know the reasons why i love you
and i love you so
when u cry, i can see your eyes
i will never let you go

sometimes i see things
like the twinkle in your eye
the breath between two stars
in the burning of the sky

i feel so strong
i feel love deep within
when i first met you
i knew you were the one

i am lucky just to hear your voice
lucky to hear you cry
as time goes i will always know
ill be there right by your side

so who are we to tempt love
but who are we to fake it
as i look into your eyes
i see the stars, they shine

this time i feel so close to you
so many this we need to do
as life flys by, we may cry
but you are not made by design

so when i say i love you
as i walk along through
i hope you find it in your heart
to say i love you to

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  • 15 years ago

    by Austin

    Okay, here's the deal: You need to add and remove words/syllables to make your lines flow rhythmically. I found myself noticing the oddity of your word choices instead of the poem. It has fine potential, you simply need to refine it.

    But, I understand a poets work is what they want it to be. So, if this is how you imagined this work, then by all means don't change it. It's brilliant as it is.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxShadowxOfxYourxShadowxXMyxMiNdxIsxFrOzEnxX

    This is really amazing poem...I loved it alot...

  • 16 years ago

    by iM LYiNG tO MY SELf

    Wow...I was nearly in tears reading this poem!! Its so emotional and touching!! This girl would be so lucky to have you!! If I ever had a guy write me a poem like that, I'd proably come close to fainting...lol maybe not but I would def cry!!! Your amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shotput Girl

    This was so amazing! I loved this. In some aspects I can relate. That's probably why I think highly of it. She must be so special to you. And you must really love her in order to write this.

  • 16 years ago

    by DaytimeStar

    Thats AWESOME!!!! i really like it. i wish there were people at my school that would write poems then i woulden't be the only one lol

    5/5

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