Very Good... expresses ur feelings hope u get wat u want

much love

tiff

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Sweet poem x

You are young but the way you write is really increadible
keep it up!!

Omg william you poem is really good omg babes it's like really really good!!!!!!!!!!

WOW william lol i LOVE this one lol comment back much love

I love your poem Will!

Luff always,
'Sydney Lu Hu'
Yoshi

Wow william i really enjoyed that poem, jaide is a lucky girl to be loved...but its so sad too,...unrequited love is very sad indeed...

This is a wonderful poem William. I hope this girl/woman reads it and feels as touched as anyone else who does.

Nice, very emotional.

Good. luv it

OMG ur amazing!!!!!!!!

I enjoyed it :) it sounds like you are infatuated with a girl..how sweet.

AWww..sO nicE..~ ^^ its so swEet!~ kEep up the gOod wOrk!~ hOpe to read mOre poeMs of yours..~ ^^ 5/5

Great poem i absolutly loved it...good luck with meeting her hun

Wow, The flow and Rhyme was amazing. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Its rly good i love it

Love it!!

This poem is so good u hav alot of talent

Creative....nice poem! GBU! Pepa

Beauitful brought a tear to my eye.