this is so amazing I love it! It flowed really well and I loved your choice of words, and usually there are at least some mistakes in most poems but I found 0. beautifully written keep it up!
xxxChristinaxxx

WOW! I loved it! It flowed so well! Keep it up hun!
Love alwayz...
Haily
XOXOXOX

this was really good i think it is just right how u wrote it it flows so good and it is a awesome poem ... 5/5

Wow, this is a great poem. Keep it up!

Love,
Tiff

keep writin. that was really good.