really cool, and by the way the eye thing for your picture is creative but creativeness is never wrong it's way cool! keep up the great writing :)

~PLP~ Lil slam~ hugs & love~

Awwww my god :*( That was amazing, I loved it, really creative too... definately a 5 for this one, keep it up...
-Take Care-
Always,
Danielle.

heather im back and i loved this poem it flowed so well your truly amazing your poem really show feeling

very nice.....i loved it....but i love all your poems.....keep it up....oh and don't apologize for being hard on me....it helps me a lot...i appreciate the honesty...so thank you =)....umm could you let me know how "You're the only help i need" is??....i dont really like it...and you're always honest about what i need to do to improve my poems....so if you get time could you let me know??....brilliant poem....take care heather ~much love~ ~more hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Wow, Heather! That was written very well! Loved the emotion that flowed through each line! Definitely 5/5! Keep it up~Holly

Another awesome poem. Great job!
Oh and I love your site! I especially love your random pics page, and that pic w/ the guy sitting in front of the tv jacking off! I couldn't stop laughing. Anyways, great poem, great site.
Love ya!
love always,
shannon

wowww!!!! dat poem wuz really good!!! it explains erding how u feel n alzo how i feel.. wut i can give iz dat u have to hav hope......never give up dat.... n alzooo always say to urself dat erding iz gonna b OKAY cuz erding will... trust me.. erding WILL b ok!!!! ;P

wowww!!!! dat poem wuz really good!!! it explains erding how u feel n alzo how i feel.. wut i can give iz dat u have to hav hope......never give up dat.... n alzooo always say to urself dat erding iz gonna b OKAY cuz erding will... trust me.. erding WILL b ok!!!! ;P

Well done, my friend, You're amazing very powerful poem. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

Wow i really like this. If anything the repetition of the number of tears is not as gd as it could be. Maybe a metaphor for them would be something to consider for future poems. It is a wonderful well-written poem however. Well done! 5/5

Heather very insperational! especially the last stanza. 5/5 Thanks for the complement by the way!
Dave.....

Superb work with this one, Heather.
5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit