awwwww this is is so sad and so good!!! oh honey many ppl i know have experianced this and it must be the most dreadful thing . im so sorry if this happened to you. stay strong

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loved this i gave it a 5 xxxxxxx

I Never See Many Abortion Poems But This 1 Was Well Worth My Read I Gave It a 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Great poem! That was just really awesome! I'm really sorry if this happened to you! (",)

~Krissy

This is horrifying, the emotion you capture in this is paralyzing! Such a tragic event, very heartbreaking!
You wrote this so well, evoking so many feelings....well done~Holly

Yes, i do. i've lost a child. you never get over the pain. it's been almost 10 years. i have a poem called "your last breath" that i wrote in honor of my precious baby daughter. your poem was very simple and quaintly written. i could feel the meloncholy and sorrow. great job.