loved this poem(and the rest iv read) youv got a lot of talent.......xxxleexxx*mwah*

loved this poem(and the rest iv read) youv got a lot of talent.......xxxleexxx*mwah*

awesome poem, but i do have a few suggestions. One, i think you tried a little to hard to rhyme this one, it wasn't as smooth as it could have been. The second is a grammatical error. The last stanza, third line, I think you meant not, instead of no. Take care, I hope to read more soon.

Wow, I loved the flow of this poem and
I completely agree with it.
I especially liked the way you wrote the second stanza.
just to let you know. in the forth line of the second stanza, It was "than" not "then".
may you be happy,
marjan