by James
Ilinca that was very good kinda sad I'm here if you need to talk ur very good friend :) |
by Pianist
It was alright. You could have left out the fifth stanza. It would have ended on a climax if you did. In the 2nd stanza second line you could change "spread" to "shed." When you use "spread" it's as if the imaginary friend creates more fear instead of depleting it. Good work with the third stanza. |