In the dark

by Broken Soul   Apr 17, 2005


How can I say this
How will it sound
I am going to cry
When no ones around
I tried to be a good girl
but nobody could tell
so I think that its time
to say my farewell
I don't want to be here
I am stuck in the dirt
I am hiding my anger
and fighting the hurt
Nobody beside me
I cant hear a sound
I want to be berried
deep in the ground
So no one can see me
and act like they care
when I know that their hearts
are not truly there
They can stop faking the feelings
and let out there hearts
I am going to be okay
I will be in the dark.

Please rate and comment on this I want to know how I am doing. Dont be afraid to tell me if it sucks and what not... thank you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    wow, that poem was really good, i loved it and read it like 3 times, it was really awesome, i cant wait to read more of your stuff, it was real sad too, great work, keep it up, 5/5

    Luv Always
    *Lucy*