Autumn

by Leah20   Apr 17, 2005


Autumn leaves
Abandon their holds
On the branches of trees
Frozen over, Stone cold

The last drop of sanity
Falls to the floor
Causing the calamity
Of a wrath come once more

Gliding down
So gently through the wind
Falling to the ground
The bedrock of sin

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  • 16 years ago

    by VSambulance

    I truly enjoyed reading it. It was easy to read because of the smooth flow of the wording. And you stuck to what you were writing about. It wasn't one of those poems that are just random words put together. Bravo.

  • 18 years ago

    by Patrick

    Wow, that was so short yet so powerful. I have to say you did a splendid job of making the flow in this poem perfect.

    5/5, West

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Wow i really liked that one it was good short but really good nice job keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by abcede

    i loved that last line!! so deep! great job.. i gave ya a 5 because the description was so vivid!! awesome
    peace,
    Abcede :)

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*^*~ longing to belong ~*^*~

    so simple yet so clear. brilliant

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