I really like the format of this poem u r great keep writing

Cool I love your style

Excellent I could feel the chill in the air - well written and delicate in its structure xx

That's cool, like the way your wrote it and stuff, yeah..

This was great. Short, but great. Keep it up.

Love,
Tiff

B.E.A.....beautiful..
Nice job.
Another 5.
All the best you and to your family cirlce.
;-)

terrific poem, I love reading your work, you are very talented, you change your writing from poem, to poem, and thats great. i tend, to write the same way in every work I do, I'm new at this, so I will learn from people like you. Thanks for sharing Love ya Becky

The interpretation of this poem could be countless but the total comparison was wonderful a great write great job...

Thats an excellent poem..

Despite of it being short, it really intrigued me, and made me want MORE..=)

Your metaphors are perfect, and your choice of words could not have better..great flow!!

*off to read more*

The rhythm in this piece was well maintained throughout, and the upbeat tempo worked well with the language you used.

Keep Writing
Nici

woah, thats realy deep nd flows wonderfuly 5/5

so simple yet so clear. brilliant

i loved that last line!! so deep! great job.. i gave ya a 5 because the description was so vivid!! awesome
peace,
Abcede :)

Wow i really liked that one it was good short but really good nice job keep it up

Wow, that was so short yet so powerful. I have to say you did a splendid job of making the flow in this poem perfect.

5/5, West

I truly enjoyed reading it. It was easy to read because of the smooth flow of the wording. And you stuck to what you were writing about. It wasn't one of those poems that are just random words put together. Bravo.