Silent Pleads (villanelle)

by Heather M Craig   Apr 18, 2005


Rather unfortunately, it's about cutting, it popped in my head quickly so forgive me for the cliche. written for poetry class.

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I'm begging for your attention
with the slices on my wrist,
it's a call beyond my tension.

I'm looking into the eyes of the mirror,
the girl far beyond the darkest of souls
as I shred her flesh forming crimson tears.

Beyond the fake smiles and the mask,
I now portrayed and image of the insides
that each of you always looked past.

The blade understands my ways
as the pain inside slowly drifts away.
I'm calling on you for guidance, set me free!
I'm begging for your help, come rescue me!

Heather M Craig
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  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice one heather, very well done this one too...
    5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    this was amazing....heather i just cant put into words how much i love your poems!! they're incredible....thank you for the comment on my new poem....my endings are always weak...it really sucks....im glad im improving though...thank you bunches =)....once again brilliant poem....im looking forward to your next ....take care ~much love~ ~lots of hugs~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by W H O R E

    Great work huni, keep your head up and stay strong, much love,
    xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That was cool and you know how to keep your poems good in a catagories. Thanks always for your comments.
    ~Deepthroat

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Honestly Heather, not as cliche as you may think! Of course the whole cutting subject is sooo over done, but what can you do! Inspiration is inspiration...lol! No really I liked it, but you have yet to write anything I don't like :) Holly

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