Arcadia

by erotema   Apr 18, 2005


Where goes my soul? it left me so,
so many moons ago.
it fled to where the summer air
blows free: Arcadia.

what shall i do? i know not where
the summer air blows free.
ill travel through the land i knew,
to find Arcadia.

how far is it to find this place?
t’would be disgrace to quit.
ive grown so old, and autumn cold
has dimmed Arcadia.

i need to find my peace of mind:
what says it will be there?
i know of where the summer air
betrays Arcadia.

where e’er i roam, i know that home
is where i left behind
but now i find the land i left
was called Arcadia.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    You have alot of flowery expression in your words and I think it makes youe message real hazy, Like I said your style is like one you would find at a cafe shop. The poerty has good words but I think all this lofty expression takes away from the message you wish to convey. I guess I am more blunt then thee please check out my work and tell me what you think...

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    I really enjoy your work. I will listen to your advice but not born2die's because he is so rude and i am a kind - hearted person. He tells you to rearrange the whole poem but it wouldn't be my poem. He left nasty comments on a few poems of other people's. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by »«¤ß詤»«

    wow your work is so deep, so well written i love it! your a talented writter!
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  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Great! 5/5 for this one! hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Nice job keep it up. you have talent

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