great poem, as usual. How could I expect anything less than perfect from you? 5/5.

I really enjoyed this poem and its message. Be thankful what you have and not lust for what you can't because you'll end up finding out that what you wanted was there all along. Nice job. The only critism I have is that you need to us proper capitillization. Using "i" instead of "I" just leave a juvenille feel hanging over a pice of work, and it may deture some one from reading it. Great job over all, keep it up!

Arcadia and the seasons of your dreams great job

Beautiful poem! Well done and keep writing!

this was cool

it is tight but what is Arcadia

Nice job keep it up. you have talent

Great! 5/5 for this one! hugs

wow your work is so deep, so well written i love it! your a talented writter!
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I really enjoy your work. I will listen to your advice but not born2die's because he is so rude and i am a kind - hearted person. He tells you to rearrange the whole poem but it wouldn't be my poem. He left nasty comments on a few poems of other people's. :)

You have alot of flowery expression in your words and I think it makes youe message real hazy, Like I said your style is like one you would find at a cafe shop. The poerty has good words but I think all this lofty expression takes away from the message you wish to convey. I guess I am more blunt then thee please check out my work and tell me what you think...