wow. That's a powerful poem. It was really good. a 5 for sure. Thanks for commenting on my poem A suicid for my family. It means alot when people comment.
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

its isnt long at all (you should read MY long poems) its such a beautyful poem, its really well expressed and has so much emotion in it.

Omg this was just brilliant, awsome, i loved how you used the "(daddy's coming"..it felt so real while reading it..it completely captivated me

pili