Good job but it sounds so much like mine. hmmmmmmmmm. lol. Good job. Never give up.

wow...so good ...if u showed her that she could never say no...i love ur poems hun....they r so different and unquie xoxo GuD JoB

~ ally ~ aka ~ broken dreams~

Very well expressed! You layed your heart out there and there isn't much more you can do! Goodl uck to you! Sorry I have fallen behind on reading everyones poems I am trying to keep up! Another great poem! Take Care! Brooke~

Robert I love it! Really! I wasn't expecting a comment on a poem from you....thanks. Very sweet. Very nice write! :) Take care...

nice work. Hope everything works out for you. :) <3333