Comments : Last lifeline

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    wow, did lis write dat? dats really gd, i gave it a five
    xx

  • 19 years ago

    by EEG

    isnt it amazing how UNIVERSAL friendship is?? no matter who we are, our friends are always there!! tell ur friend that her work is great!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    weell ur friends clearly has a talent...really good poem! xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Hey your friend shud join this site, shes great! Especially loved this bit:

    A red laced heart
    darkened wings

    Brillianto xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lemma

    Hey, great poem. You friend has really good talent. Tel her to keep writin n u do da same. ltp x

  • 17 years ago

    by colourmehappy

    Hun did i write this?
    x