Sometimes we do wish we could so much to change things, especially for our friends and the people we love. Some have it so hard and my heart goes out to them. Beautiful and touching piece my dear. So much sadness in this world. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

I know how you feel, but trust me there is no way you could have taken their place or stopped the pain their suffering. It's so hard to except I know, but eventually everything will begin to sink in (sorte of). All we can do is pray for them.
~anne~

aww thats so sad car!! i love it but its sad! hope ur ok...ttyl8r!

*jenny*

freakin great. i like this whole thing. every word, comma, period it all comes together as a beautiful poem. so awsome. great work. my favorite part of this whole thing

**Everything's going to be ok.**

that makes me happy. haha and i hope that your ok? Much Luv always

Nick

wow, all. ty!
Car

Oh, Carlee...good poem. I love it...I feel so bad that that had to happen...I wish that I could change it too...or taken that place...Good people don't deserve that...
katie

very sad... there are some times when I wish I could have taken someone elses place too... All I can say is stay strong
-J-

omg im crying... carlee this is so cool!!!!! im so happy you made it to top five too!!!! im seriously crying though... i am with you all the way... i really wish i could kick those peoples a**es right now. he wont ever deserve that pain. great great great poem
~cort~

:*( omg, I'm crying... (well maybe I was before I read it) but wow... that was amazing... *deserves a five*

Take Care,
Always, Danielle.

Thanks, all of you... really. Thank you.
Car

It's late? It's early, here in Colorado, lol. Yeah, it's about a good friend of mine. He'll be ok... he's gonna get through this. Thanks!
Car

Lol, sorry, lu, i had homework to do. It was like, 3 p.m. when I was on here. Sorry i left! i'll give him sugar. You need to calm down!
Car

this is sad... i know how it is... i had a friend whos mind was set in something u can say a sin, but i guess even if he told me before the night, theres none i can do coz he's heart and mind was already set... so all im doin right now is acceptance and forgiving... and yea... every night i still pray for my friends eternal peace...

sad poem but very well written... keep it up...

hope u pass by mine sometimes... votes and comments much appreciated...
much love
***letishia***