wonderful poem!

wow, wonderful poem, so emotional!!
keep up the great work!! xx

wow thats amazing, excellent, absolutely amazing, flowed really well and was so full of emotion and imagery,
all my love,
ellie
xoxoxox

wow so powerful think this is one of ur best...espec liked how u described other people and their opinions with such great use of vocab and imagery! excellent! hope ur okay tho and take care of urself
xxxLoUxxx

Oh hun, this was beautiful. The imagery was so good - the tightrope. Am really feelin like that at the mo. The first stanza blew me away:

Carefully walking this tight rope
seems to grow thinner with each dawn
no safety harness to save me
feet bleeding, the skin ripped and torn

'with each dawn' seemed to really speak to me...im here for you still xxxx

thats was brilliant well done it was so full of emotions i was gripped to every word you have a great talent you are an amazing writer im final making a favs list and your on it
hugs,
jen x x x