The Other Side

by authum darkness   Apr 18, 2005


There once was a girl
Who never showed
The other side of herself
She was always ecstatic on the outside
But what no one knew was that
She was very depressed on the inside
Never writing her feelings down
She just bottled them up inside
Until she exploded
Having thoughts of suicide
But never going through with her plans
Because she thought about her friends and family
And what they would do if they ever lost her
But one day
She couldn't take it any more
She ran away from home
And she was never seen again
What happened to her?
No one will ever know
Except for her and God

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  • 18 years ago

    by David Marshall

    I like the concept...but im gonna be honest..considering your other poesm were sooo great...i think u have the capability to make this poem flow a lil better..but i can understand the meaning of what your trying to say..and thats what counts...keep it up

    Take care
    David

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Good poem. 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    That's so sad! You have to let out your feelings or you will go crazy. No one knows whats going on inside a person if they don't open up. Another good poem! Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by authum darkness

    thank you so much! this poem was published in a book! hey, e-mail me sometime:crazy_daisy07@hotmail.com

  • 19 years ago

    by *Friends Are Stars*

    really good poem, 5/5 im always here if you need to talk to someone xxxxx

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