Comments : It's Over

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Chelsea, my dear, how did you get confused? -- I've tooken over the mind of someone who can see all that is going to happen & I can see these lil children dying so I tell them to "hush" so mommy/daddy doesn't hear them and they ignore my pleads and in return die. Very simple. but thank you for the comment anyhow.

    ---------------
    As for your poem, it would of been better if you wouldn't of used "away" so much, try mixing it up but not a bad attempt. I've seen WAY worse.

    Love
    Heather