Good poem, let it all out girl. Guys r scumbags, but there is hope ^.^
5/5, keep writing k!
Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

thanks! this poem was about a guy I went out with. he was a scumbag! ;)

I can relate to this poem guys can be some real jerks! Not all but I have found a lot of them. Good job and Keep posting! Take Care! Brooke

yeah, i met someone good, but i don't know what happened?

you started whith a ryhme....where did it go? oh well ryhme would have taken away from the power and anger you potray in this poem. your flow is lost in some parts, the third line, due to a change in ryhme stands out alot. I like this poem. i truly do 4/5
~Breeze

I like this poem, it reminds me of the guy that says he loves me but he talk behind my back, well great job... keep it up