Amanda, Sad but well put. I know where you're coming from, I'm short to. But you know what matters most is the beauty of the heart, and sometimes I'm taller than them all. Always try to look at it this way. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

A very well written poem. I understand the feeling of shortness, though I'm no longer short, per se.

Aww, great work huni :) *hug* Keep your head up and stay strong love
xo

very emotional poem, u really let ur feelings out, i think every1 wants to change atleast 1 thing about themselvs, but you should be greatful for what you have, your perfect in God's eyes, remember that, you're a women, so dont let others get to you, rise above it all. take care

Well written, has a very expressive quality to it while still being simple.

Hmm, can't say that I know how you feel, cause I don't have problems with my height, but I'm so sorry that you have to go through this. How tall are you in cm??? Great poem anyway, it's good to get all of you feelings out.....Hope to hear from you soon, after you get you new computer =0) Feel better soon Amnada...

*Love Sabrina*

Aww, i know how you feel, im very short too and when people ask my age they dont believe me. Alot of people run into me also, its like im invisible. Anyway, i loved the poem!! Great work.

I know exactley how u feel except i get made fun of because im so tall! im about 6 feet tall and 13 so i get made fun of alot...everyone calls me a giraffe too and i HATE it! so i know how u feel! By the way great poem! i liked it...

Sooo maybe i want to be original. Got a problem??? LOL! My own thoughts. Can't help that. is this all u do - abuse people. God ur boring!!!

I am 5ft 4in but everyone knows where I am and what I am doing. I make a point of it. I am loud and don't care what people think. A large ego can fit in a small body Look at Nepolean!!! Anyway fromn one small person to a nother, heighten your voice call out your words and people will know you for the woman you are by the way you present yourself not by your height I hope this helps.

Don't worry about your height so much it really doesn't matter. When it come to who you are as a person that's what matters. My son is short! I am 5'5 so I am about average but I don't know now days some of these teenagers are so tall. Very well expressed in the poem! Keep your head up and don't let it get to you! Take Care! Brooke

yeah. i could write the exact opposite of this poem. i am 6' 4"... everyone says "youre really tall". i always want to reply "youre really dumb". but your poem is well written. keep up the good work.

Amanda, you don't have to justify why you write what you write, you do it because you feel like that at that precise second. So I'd like you to pop on over to the mirror and take a good look at yourself and say 'I am proud of writing my poetry. I am proud of me'. If you have to say it everyday and trust me pretty soon you'll just think it as you walk past without even knowing it. And you should honey because your work comes from the heart xx

you're a really good writer and your poems really express how you feel
~keep it up~

this was great. it was nice and original. 5/5

aww great poem.. u really express yourself.. nice 5/5

Pretty Good!!! not my favorite but good