Comments : A Clown's Smile {edited}

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Awh <3.
    Pain is hidden inside us all - In many different ways. Another stunning write.

    Loving you -
    ;;Kal.

  • 19 years ago

    by Maisha

    amazingly you know how im feeling by feeling it yourself...this is by far one of my favourites...use this as your outlet not yourself...i love you....

    -ish

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    well written dark poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemini

    Allie...wow...loved it...

  • 19 years ago

    by Luke

    that was a really good poem except that i personally find clown scary. i HATE them. so a clowns smile to me aint really a happy thing. but i totally see what your saying and i give this an enthusiastic 5/5. take care.
    -Luke

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    this is such a cool poem, i love the part about a tattooed grin, sets a image in my mind. wonderful write

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by Alissa

    I love it...I know how you feel...wow great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    i agree with luke. clowns freak me out but i loved it anyway....great job 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by topoke

    i always say that the clown is the sadest person in the room. this is a good wee poem as us Scots say.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ali

    Another awesome poem!