Bleeding Tears

by Jacklyn   Apr 19, 2005


Through my bleeding tears,
Shows my painful years,
Through my bleeding heart,
Shows it was barely ever loved.

Through my bleeding soul,
Shows it ran dry of hope,
Through my painful cries,
Shows my desire for a different life.

Through my broken smile,
Shows my pain and denial,
The pain the never ends,
Spills through my bleeding pen.

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  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    It is so beautiful...it shows that u have the ability to transfer your pain and other emotions into words on paper. I liked how you kept using the word bleeding, it described a lot. 5/5!!!
    Hey about that song i wrote, yeah you're exactly right! I actually thought no one would get it so i'm tryin to get the reader's opinion, just to see the results, tryin to make them think. =) This should be fun... Luv Ya So Much ~lil slam~ Thank u for all the comments! Peace Grrl, //ari\\ aka $!l3n+ @++!+ud3

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Powerful poem, I like the emotions that come out in this poem, and in all your poems, you are a very talented writer, keep going...

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Oh i like it, very good! stay strong
    xxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    It ended well, no need to change anything. I love the 2nd and 3rd stanza! 5/5

    Love you
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Very promising write hun. Words on paper are the things that keep us going. :D
    Nice work girl.

    Loving you angel -
    ;;Kal.

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