Aww, this is so sad! I know exactly how your feeling as my grandpa had Alzheimers also. He didnt even know who i was :( |
by Misstress
Nicely done...i honestly like it. |
by Jason Meres
Thr rhythm seems to be off, but it never skips a beat or fails to flow. Very well done. |
by happy days
wow, that was a really good poem although it was very sad. it flowed really nicely and was well written, keep it up and stay strong xxx |
this is really sad :( lilkit xx |
This poem expresses the fears and suffuringof many who have been affected by alzheimers. Dorothy Womack who is my editor has written a book of poems which is on the top ten in its category. by sharing our fears we do not feel alone. if you feel alone visit her site at http//www.geecites.com/womack47/index.html |
by Tammy
Such a powerfully emotional write. I know what you mean when you fear your mother may get it as well. I feel the same way. I went through it with my grandma, who was one of my best friends, it was really hard. Don't let it eat at you though. Hang in there. |
by Jeff
Good poem and guess what you will be fine and your mother as well.Don't worry.Loved your writting.Jeff |