Veiled

by ~*LorienElf*~   Apr 19, 2005


Trapped behind this veil
That I cannot take away
Cut off from the rest of life
And I fear it's here to stay

My face is hidden behind it
No expressions of feeling can they see
Unless they dig inside my heart
But they're too scared of me

I might as well be invisible
All they see is the shadowy cloak
They don't want to see what's beyond
Or that the inside of me is broke

I try to scream for help
So someone can bring with them the day
But I can scream until there is no breath
And still they cannot hear what I say

A new veil I feel is forming
Between my head and my heart
I try to see past the blackness
But I can't take the veil apart

Now I'm forced to choose
Do I follow my heart or my head
But when I can't follow either
Sometimes I just wish I was dead

No one can help me now
They can't get past the black veil
I just hope I'll be able to see again
Or in my life I will fail

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Oh my god! That was so amazing. I am speechless beyond words. This must be your best...if it isnt then you are extremely talented.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Wow, I love this poem. Very unique. I like it. Excellent job. <3333

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Very well done, wonderful expression and scheme.

  • 19 years ago

    by Tya

    hi, good job! 5/5!!!
    dont ever stop writing.
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    tya

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel E F Allen

    For someone so young that is a powerful poem honey. Keep it up xx

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