Hey This is a real good poem...u sed that its bout ur lyf...well its also bout myn 2...it is heapz good...

i voted on this earlier, but was kicked offline =grrr! but anyway, I don't think it's bad at all. You described a lot of people in this world, as well as most people on this site. But you know what hurts the most, being in a crowded room with everyone you love, but being lonely =( Great job Danielle 5/5

Love Always,
Heather M Craig

Great poem. Very heartfelt, I'm sure alot of people can relate, myself included. Take care and be strong. You'll get through this.
- shell x

Awesome...

I made myself friendless,
Pushing everyone away.
I made them all hate me,
By every word I didn’t say.

I LOVE that stanza... in fact I love this whole poem. You've got true talent, and I hope that you start writing again soon because I can't get enough of your poems. Great job! xoxo