Brainstorm

by paperdoll   Apr 19, 2005


Thinking for too long and too deeply
and it leads to my surrender,
to this delicious spiralling mess,
to this dizzying whirlwind of words,
to this: a fluttering fumbling kiss
distilled and spilling from my lips
to tremble over me,
a storm in a skin cell,
haemoglobin flight.

In this dream state
of unbeing, I catch my name
in a deafening void;
a rush of breath in the mindless force
of a hurricane inside my soul.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mo

    Well ... put me down for that word too then!! :)

    Brilliant write - again! You are a very talented writer - and I believe you are only 16 at that (not that brilliance is dependant upon age but just imagining what your works will be like in 10 years time. Fantastic.

    I'll be adding you onto my favourites list to make sure I dont miss any more of your poems.