i know i wrote the poem.... but i think its really good.... plz plz rate and comment.. give me an idea of what you think.... plz

Definitely very powerful words. It's pretty good.
-J-

my dad want's me to be like my older sister but I am far from it so I am forced to live with the fact I am not good enough for him
life sucks but keep it very good poem mine are mianly about suicide plz read mine

You can only be yourself not what someone else wants you to be! Full of deep emotion! Once again very sad! Keep posting! Take Care! Brooke

very well written poem....i really felt it...it was soo powerful. Ur a very talented writer. Just be urself, not wut someone else wants u to be...lolz i know its hard and this advice comin from me is probably pointless considerin i can't even follow it....lolz...but yea....

Ne wayz keep up the fantastic work! another 5/5!
~Luvz~
~Chica~

I love it so much

my poems bout my dad to !!
great job
5/5

Sad but I love it and expresses great emotion in the sistuation very nice

Wow. this poem was very powerful and made me think of how my dad makes me feel when his actions tell me i'm not good enough to be his daughter. really liked the poem 5/5!
((Kelsey))