Great poem! I voted a 5..

aww i really like your poems alot..you are very very good. keep it up..5/5!

Intelligent thoughts provoke me to give you a 5. However, a few grammatical corrections won't kill you. Good job though. Very easy flowing
~Hina

I've had this feeling before, it's not great.
It really describes your hate and love for this person without having the poem be really long.
5/5