by ShadowedPhoenix Apr 19, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Goodbye sweet angel |
by pseudo
Wow..a real heartbreaker but heartfelt this poem really tugs on your heart strings..lol i used heart to many times..this poem is sad =(.. but very well written.. i liked how you didnt actually say anythng about suicide instead you said that goodbye and you're never comming back..[was it about suicide when you wrote about moving on?] well anyways great write! leep it up |
by Letty
This is terrific and it's beautifully written. The format is well done as well... I think I'm gonna cry...keep up the good work..5/5 |
Parting is such a sad thing to do! This has been expressed so well in your poem. Good work. |
good poem i guess |
by Mark Coates
that is truly amazing |