Brilliant as usual! Loved the line,
'It's true but for us it wasn't the right time'
It just stuck out to me! Great job
Take care,
- Shell xx

hey great poem and thanx 4 the comments xxxx

I like it a lot. Youre a talented writer.
..Great poem.
All the best to you!.
;-)

I liked it. Really good. 5/5
~keep it up~

-no more

Another great poem!!! I've made my decision,
there's no turning back!
I'm leaving, I must
Goodbye angel AND I'm never coming back!
poetic brilliance, you cant teach it!!!

that is truly amazing

good poem i guess

Parting is such a sad thing to do! This has been expressed so well in your poem. Good work.

Warmest regards,

Steve

This is terrific and it's beautifully written. The format is well done as well... I think I'm gonna cry...keep up the good work..5/5

Wow..a real heartbreaker but heartfelt this poem really tugs on your heart strings..lol i used heart to many times..this poem is sad =(.. but very well written.. i liked how you didnt actually say anythng about suicide instead you said that goodbye and you're never comming back..[was it about suicide when you wrote about moving on?] well anyways great write! leep it up

--emotionless19.*