Cuts...

Oh my god :( i love your work so much...:'(

hey...
Well you commented on mine and I was interested in your work. Well I like it. And I know what this is like to, because Im a cutter. I really want you to email me. I hope you do!
tipsieturtleme@yahoo.com

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

I didn't like it at all. Sure, there might be emotion in it, but it seems like you have no idea what you're talking about. For example, at the end you talk about how the cuts make you happy, but the blood makes you sad, cry. You wouldn't hurt yourself to make yourself cry, you would hurt yourself to make yourself not cry because you don't want to cry anymore cause life or whatever is so depressing. Cutting yourslef would be a form in your mind and body subconcisoully letting you know that these cuts don't hurt they feel good because everything else doesn't feel good. I believe that if you tryed a little harder in ryhming and getting all the emotions together and making them make since you could write one big long poem and express yourself a lot more and with more understanding...

This poem is full of emotion, which makes it really good. Thanks for commenting on my poem it really means alot to me. If you want to email me your more than welcome to- tipsieturtleme@yahoo.com I hope that I hear from you soon!
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

hey i just wanted to tell you that i love your poem. and that i feel the exact way...keep writing your good.