Seen from within

by BloodScars   Apr 19, 2005


To see the sadness
in a persons eyes
you need to know
how to hear their cries

to know what their going through
you need to see inside
their heart and mind controls them
all their body's do is hide

to understand why they cry
to know why the never try
to know why they want to die
u need to live through 1's eye

to see in in a point of view
why they need the pain
why they need blood in their life
to cut right at the vein

to understand whats
going threw their mind
as they pick up the razor
its truly hard to find

to see within their soul
whats really going on
that u've been lied to
to know that they want gone

2 c the sadness they hold within
to see that hidden grin
all u need to do
is live in there skin

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliant poem. only 2 points...

    these two lines appear to contain typos:

    "to see in in a point of view"
    and
    "going threw their mind"

    other than that a brilliant peice.

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    I mixed up the "theirs" a lot...(they're, their, there)...But that's just a minor thing. FYI Their:ownership They're:they are There:place/point of existence

    Otherwise it's a well thought out poem and very emotional.

  • 19 years ago

    by Stephanie

    good poem i like it alot!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ..::.alreadyGoNe..::.

    hi

  • great poem very emotional and well written >>5/5<<
    bec xXx