Your content and expression is very solid, the flow could use a bit of work, but i'm not the best to give advice on that. Overall, I liked it very much, you have a good deal of talent.

A lot can happen in a year. Time will go by so fast try and stay strong! Try not to regret use it as a learning experience. That has always helped me! Very powerful and well expressed! Take Care! Brooke~

Hey, this is a great poem. I really like the meaning and I'm sorry about everything you've gone through. Keep being strong 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

great. wonderful. excellent. very well written. You express your feelings so great. just keep it up.