by Robert Apr 19, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Strike one and blood spattered through the air, |
by Brookeღ
I see your point mine lacks the detail. The problem I have is when I write I have a problem expressing past experiences that I have put behind me. I wish I could write in such detail but I find my thoughts get shattered and I am all over the place with the poem. If I would have only wrote back then. I am learning a lot with each poem I write and it's people like you that give me the ideas and the help I need to improve! I can't express enough how much I love your work! Brooke |
by Lecrissa
Sad but so offten true...good job |
by Avellana
i really like this poem but i'm not sure bout the ending. what happened? i'm soz, having ANOTHER dense moment. |
by AJ
that was sad but well written. good job. 5/5 ~keep it up~ |
by Hina
elegent, thought provoking and succinct. Love it! |