First Strike

by Robert   Apr 19, 2005


Strike one and blood spattered through the air,
strike two left, brains in her hair.
Strike three and it was the end,
for her husband left death as her only friend.
The child watched as they carried her away,
and all he could do is pray.
His mentor, the man he looked up to, has done this,
swinging without cause even after a passionate kiss.
The boy had seen this so many times before,
and his mother stayed so the boy thought she wanted more.
More of the blood that bled from her body, from time to time,
and his father doing this so frequently how could it be a crime.
It ended with his mother always locking him in the room,
while she was pushing glass with a broom.
Was this the child’s thought when they drove his mother away,
or was his father just a hunter killing his prey?
Ten years have gone by from that faithful night,
and the boy remembers that fight.
Then it happened as he held his own little tyke,
a vision of hate and anger then he made the first strike.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I see your point mine lacks the detail. The problem I have is when I write I have a problem expressing past experiences that I have put behind me. I wish I could write in such detail but I find my thoughts get shattered and I am all over the place with the poem. If I would have only wrote back then. I am learning a lot with each poem I write and it's people like you that give me the ideas and the help I need to improve! I can't express enough how much I love your work! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Sad but so offten true...good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Avellana

    i really like this poem but i'm not sure bout the ending. what happened? i'm soz, having ANOTHER dense moment.

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    that was sad but well written. good job. 5/5 ~keep it up~

    -no more

  • 19 years ago

    by Hina

    elegent, thought provoking and succinct. Love it!
    Hina~