Against Death

by ♥CRIMSONxX♥   Apr 19, 2005


Her life is fading away

Is this just to make me pay?

Why is she going through so much pain?

Seeing her like this, drives me insane

Is it my fault she is dying?

Is it my fault, for all this crying?

What can i do to turn back time?

Have i commited, a terrible crime?

Is she going to slip away in her bed?

When no-one knows, that she is dead

What can i do to make things right?

Why is she losing her fight?

Against Death

*Please vote and comment, i wrote this poem for someone and i would really wanna know what everyone thinks x*

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  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    great poem!!
    wow...you have a great way with words:)

    love ya!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    I really like it, especially the way it comes to an abrupt end at the end, very effective, keep it up xxx

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