Hey, that is a really sad poem. Also sweet and brilliant!! I hope you arent really gnona end it. Things will always get hard for ya from time to time. Happens to us all. It doesnt get any easier to get through it but everyone has just gotta find a way to deal with it eventually. Hope this helps a little. xx

That's quite a upsetting poem you've wrote. Very good though. I hope it isn't your last poem, as I enjoy reading your poetry. Take care
Serenity
xoxoxx

i loved your poem i also hope it is not your last poem becuase you write very well

comment and read mine teen writer and he cant take me

thanx hugs