Wow...That was really good mija....I liked it a lot...dont be hard on yourself..obviously it wasnt ment to be if you and him arnt together...keep your head up and continue writing...

nice poetry, never stop writing!
you did'nt have to break up with the poor guy that way, you could've just introduced him to someone else and said to him " carry on with her where we left off" bye.

nice poem
but i see you're 13
how many time could you have broken up and got together again
never mind.
good work

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