Two Become One

by Heather M Craig   Apr 20, 2005


The fire in your eyes
burned through my spirit of serenity,
The darkness inside of your heart
unwillingly enveloped me.

The pain you beguiled
is now apart of my wretched soul.
The fate you constructed
has taken total control.

You hold the only dreams to my future
so it's in your hands solely.
You found the hidden treasure
of my heart's only key.

The peaks and valleys
hit me all of a sudden.
True love was proven to my undisturbed eyes
when two became one.

Heather M Craig

---In true love, the souls connect, you must be able to take the bad attributes of that person rather than just the good.---I didn't think it was strong enough for the love category so I just stuck it here.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Great work darling and as always atrue pleasure to read, I loved this poem would have to be one of my faves of all your work so far. I think its beautifully descriptive with a hidden depth, a brilliant write babes...All the best :o)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Great piece of writing, heather. Wonderfully expressed..
    5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    AWESOME POEM! BY FAR ONE OF MY FAVORITES NOW! GREAT JOB.
    YOU JUST GET BETTER EVERYDAY :)

    Love,
    Me

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    wow, great poem! wish i could say more but i have to go!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    i like this poem! well done