I disagree, i thought it was an awesome poem, but then my stuff is pretty bad, so i know my opinion is meaningless 5/5

Heather, Another great write, when it comes to talent you've been truly blessed. I've said it so much, you probably wish I would shut up but I love all your beautiful poems. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

Beautifully penned...loved this stanza:

"The fire in your eyes
burned through my spirit of serenity,
The darkness inside of your heart
unwillingly enveloped me."

Well done~Holly

i like this poem! well done

wow, great poem! wish i could say more but i have to go!

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~

AWESOME POEM! BY FAR ONE OF MY FAVORITES NOW! GREAT JOB.
YOU JUST GET BETTER EVERYDAY :)

Love,
Me

Great piece of writing, heather. Wonderfully expressed..
5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit

Great work darling and as always atrue pleasure to read, I loved this poem would have to be one of my faves of all your work so far. I think its beautifully descriptive with a hidden depth, a brilliant write babes...All the best :o)