by Switchblade89 Apr 20, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
As I sit here growing older and older, |
by Melissa
So sad, but beautifully written. The flow was flawless and I love the repeat of "(She has not gone,she will never go)" at the end of each stanza. Excellent and touching write! |
by sam kings
The way you let your feelings flow through that poem is fantastic, you are right, mourn a loss but you must get on with life because they will always be with you, read soldier if you like, you dont have to comment or anything but it has a similar perspective near the end.. |
by Syn
Touching" |
by Syn
Awwwwww.... thats soo youching.. your going on my favorite man. |
Wow, gee, thats amazingly written.. thats really excellent... ¨ |