aw hey...that poem almost made me cry seriously gud work.... i will talk to you later...i so loved it..

~Ally~

that brought a tear to my eye!!!!!!!!! i feel the same way bout my nan.......such a good poem. *hugs* x)

That's so sad sorry about your loss! I know I feel the same way about my grandpa he will always be here with me! Very emotional poem! Great work! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

I'm so sorry for your loss. That is a beautiful poem. Keep it up.

that was good I feel the same about my cousin. Read my poem the "Worst day of my life". And you'll understand what I meant. 5/5 that was great

that was great. i havent lost any one, but i havent seen my mom in 4 years so i can relate only the tiniest bit. hold strong,she will never leave you.
5/5

-kk-

Aw im sowyz for ur aunt but that was awesome

Same here sorry for ur aunt but that was a great poem

Aww, its so sweet. i never read stuff like this from a 16/17 yr. old.
its so awesome.

It's so sweet, your aunt must be so proud of you, It's so beautiful, very very touching, i can't keep my eyes of it.
I gotta read it another time.
Thanks for your comment, it helps me alot.

Wow, gee, thats amazingly written.. thats really excellent... ¨
Thanx for commenting on my poem,
It is appriciated...
Love, Line

Awwwwww.... thats soo youching.. your going on my favorite man.

Touching"

The way you let your feelings flow through that poem is fantastic, you are right, mourn a loss but you must get on with life because they will always be with you, read soldier if you like, you dont have to comment or anything but it has a similar perspective near the end..
all my love
take care
sammy xx

So sad, but beautifully written. The flow was flawless and I love the repeat of "(She has not gone,she will never go)" at the end of each stanza. Excellent and touching write!