Hoping For The Best...

by Kailynn Makenna   Apr 20, 2005


This morning I woke up
And I did my best to smile
Because this pain I feel
Can only last a while

I don't know if I can heal
But ill do my best to try
Because I know that it is wrong
That I always wish to die

My life has fallen apart
And that I know is true
But I hope that will some effort
I can safely make it through

I know this is my fault
That things turned out this way
And I hope things get better
With every passing day

And I know that with some help
Things might turn around
And I will no longer want to be
Six feet beneath the ground

So now ill do my best
To put this pain aside
And ill try to convince myself
That I no longer want to die

And maybe with some time
This will all be in the past
And then I will be strong
Because this pain just couldn’t last

..yea im trying to be positive...
...this poem sucks by the way...
...vote and comment if you choose...

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  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    Nice poem
    kt xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    It doesn't suck! It's good...anything about make yourself better is GOOD!!! Nice write!! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Jess

    this doesnt suck AT ALL.. its FAR from sucking.. it was very good, and i can tell you were trying to be positive.. im very proud :o) and nothing was your fault.. i promise.. but this poem was great your the best <3 I LOVE YOU--I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER!!!!!! and CONGRATULATIONSS!!! YOUVE REACHED YOUR 100th POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAYYYYY :o)

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    ooooh hun, this poem doesn't suck i really liked it and new it came from inside you which is what counts the most, your a greta writer and i hope every thing does get better, i like your talent! keep it up k

    Luv Always
    *Lucy*