omg, that is so sad, and im sorry you went through that, i hope you are ok, and please try to keep your head up, that poem really was from your heart they don't have to ryhme if they have soal, and hun, yours had soal and heart and spirit and mind, your a beautifulk girl with a beautiful talent, sorry about your parents sweety,
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Luv Always
*Lucy*

Thank you sooo much
my mom left when i was
about six years old and i've lived with my dad every since. But he is a great dad but now that he has this new girlfriend and i hate her so much and i just really miss my mom a lot more than i use too. she lives in Georgia and she just had a baby girl and i have a older sister too..but they both live with her and im the only one who doesn't..soo its kinda hard growing up with out a mom but i'll make it...But thank you very much for your comment..:)

that was a good peom i liked it

This is a very good poem and i know every feeling you have in this but not all this is a very good poem too if you ever wanna talk e-mail me 5/5 also if you get a chance plz comment on my poems and vote that would mean alot to me but your poem is great.

**** good poem... it was the same with me but longer and much more complicated.. hope ure ok <3 5/5 XxX check out some of my poems to please thnks ****